Sunday, September 15, 2013

Feedback!

It would amazing to hear feedback from readers. It encourages me to come up with more scenarios and write interesting stories for everyone. No feedback makes me feel no ones reading...
Tell me what you think so far!

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2 comments:

  1. AnonymousSeptember 17, 2013 at 4:26 PM

    I really love your stories. All have been GREAT! I like the mom/son, bro/sis and dad/daughter ones! But especially mom/son! :)

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  2. AnonymousAugust 11, 2014 at 10:16 PM

    I really like your style, your prose, themes, etc. I prefer less violent (i.e. bloody) conclusions though. Thanks for sharing!!

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